Score: 10

"0/5, 10/10"

submission: $00pah NiN10Doh! 2

date: January 4, 2009

underdog of the week ftw

my criticism so that this doesn't get deleted:
everything was perfect, don't change a thing

Score: 10

"A beautiful masterpiece."

submission: Mega Awesome 3

date: January 1, 2009

To start, I will explain my scoring decisions.

The graphics were amazing. I liked all the drawings in both parts. Both were very detailed beyond imagination. The first piece had the better graphics, but a plot was lacking. This is ok though, because of the astounding loop it made back around which could go on for hours and hours without getting boring (even though I only watched it for about one hour). The second part's graphics were also good but not AS good as the first. However, the second had a very indepth plot which required less animation in the people's motions, such as the Broken Saints movies. The second part also had more variety of backgrounds, and character development.

As for the style, both had a unique style I have never seen before. The first part had the happyleetghost in two different styles, the smooth, and the sketchy (seen in the thumbnail). This diverse series of styles was thrilling to watch, especially the traced looking P-Bot near the background. It appeared as it was traced which added a lot more style to the display of characters. In the second part, the style was darker and more serious. It had a unique drawing, framed, on the backwall of the third background or so. I loved the style in this part.

And the sound. The sound is what pulls this entire submission together. In the menu, it makes it exciting to click the play button for each part and draws the viewer into the piece. In the first part, the looping music matches the looping animation. This is also what makes this part a masterpiece. When music and animation sync, it's beautiful and always will be. The second part's music synced very will too. In the battle scene, the music is what brings the battle to life, like in the movie, Troy. In that movie, the music is what makes the battles a moment to remember, and this is what this part does. The epic feel of the mighty characters dueling it out is what most people are urging for as they watch Newgrounds submissions.

So that is what brings us into the violence of this submission. There was not much violence in the first part, but in the second part, the violence makes up for lack of violence in the first part. Whoever created the idea of having violence in one half of the movie to make up for the other half is a genius because I very well see it here. THIS is genius. The violence of a movie brings out the emotions and wonderous ways of real human life and the anger and hatred one feels towards the other. It almost brings you right into the movie and makes the viewer take a side of their own, almost like a game, which makes the viewer interact with the movie.

This leads into the interactivity found in both of these parts. The first puts you into a trance and keeps you watching for a long time, longer than playing an actual game. The buttons to choose the parts are also very unique. I have never seen such buttons for the viewer to press with the click of a mouse to choose which part they would like to see. Most would just play them in succession, but you took it a step further. This is another tool to keep the viewer into the action.

Another element of the direction of this animation was the magnificent humor built into the seriousness of both parts. The first part had satire I have never seen nor heard of, and the jokes in the first part were also very original. In the second part, the lack of animation of the character not only gives it simple graphics, or a unique style, it also brings laughter to the hearts of many who watch this movie, whether they know it or not.

In conclusion, to make my point more clear, this is one of the best submissions on Newgrounds at this moment, and should be respected more than it is by fellow Newgrounds viewers, voters, and reviewers. This dual part movie deserves much more than a 2/5, and therefore should have more than a 2/5. I hope you spend time on another because I really enjoy your work. This is why I give you a 10/10, for the eye-candy graphics, the ear-candy music, and the side-splitting humor.

Sincerely,
Starogre

Good luck!

Score: 7

"pretty cool"

submission: Blush Your Teeth

date: December 30, 2008

your style is definitely unique and i like the morph animations

try to add a bit more ease in and out on the animation though. a lot of it seems to move at a constant rate with no accel/deccel. thats the only problem i had with it

good work though.

Score: 4

"its an okay game"

submission: PANCAKES!!!

date: December 29, 2008

at first it seems funny just because of what it is, but as a game it's not fun

at some parts the enemies are rediculously placed and on one level once you fall you can't get back up...

don't just take engines from tonypa tutorials. if you understand the code behind it you'll understand how to make a better game

Score: 9

"dude"

submission: DBZ Final Penis

date: December 29, 2008

that was funny but you should make the penis thing a surprise! don't name the title something that gives it away. it'd be SO MUCH FUNNIER IF YOU RENAME IT

Score: 10

"wtf"

submission: Mega Awesome 2

date: December 28, 2008

why are people still giving this 10s~!?!# ITS A RIPOFF OF BITEY OF BRACKENWOOD! THIS GUY JUST COPIES GRANFALOON AND GETS AWAY WITH IT

Score: 10

"SORRY"

submission: Mega Awesome

date: December 27, 2008

this has been done before...you ripped off the style of egoflappasaurus and now you're going to get a monthly and maybe tank award of the year just because you stole his style....i'm really disappointed in you...

STIR THE FUCK OUT OF IT! AND WHADDYA GET!? PPPPPEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNISSSSSSSS

Score: 9

"best spam i've seen all year!"

submission: Frost'D

date: December 25, 2008

good work. loved the animation of the snowman struggling to get out the door. liked the colors as well.

short, but funny and gets the message across. it was scary enough for little kids or whoever else would think their snowman is real i guess.

Score: 9

"haha very funny."

submission: Santa's Green Dilemma

date: December 25, 2008

i love it. good graphics, great character animation. and good humor. it's a little short but that's how it's meant to be. good work. hope to see more.

with your characters, change the poses a lot more and move their limbs more while they talk. it'll make them even more lovable! merry christmas! this deserves higher than a 4.11...

Score: 8

"haha!"

submission: Blistered Tongue

date: December 24, 2008

love it! graphics were great! there coulda been better animation but the humor made up for that. good work. skeleton's 'jaw dropping' was quite clever :)