Score: 4

"bad"

submission: Paper Mario And THOF

date: September 19, 2006

the only good things were the voices and humor...

the rest is unoriginal, plot is slightly original, characters are all unoriginal...

we all know mario exhists stop submitting mario movies

Score: 2

"blordow and hlg are both right"

submission: Deformables Zombie War II

date: September 17, 2006

this movie was totally ripped from the internet

if you can't draw backgrounds you don't steal them from other websites....seriously, the record player looked like crap! and you are even more lazy when the zombie is eating the guy and u don't see it, then when the guy looks, he stops...are you that lazy to animate the guy eating him? guess so

i'm trying not to be harsh but as said in other reviews the traced bitmaps look awful and are not pleasing to the eye of other flash authors...

just try and draw your own backgrounds, it's a lot easier than animating a character i think...

the music was great and well synced so i don't have a problem with that from what i see...

good job with the character animation, but please try and draw all your stuff next time! thanks...it'll make everyone happier!

Score: 10

"good job man, one of your best movies yet!"

submission: Squaresville

date: September 16, 2006

i'm sure you're very proud of it, so am i. :D

i'm the saviour btw, thank me later lol

Score: 10

"nice man, nice."

submission: Line and Sinker

date: September 14, 2006

graphics are low because i dont like sprites

style is low because sprites have been done before

sound is high because the song rules

minimal violence

interactivity (ooooh a play button woohoo!)

humor is sorta high because i love piranha plants

10 overall, just because.

Score: 10

"lets just hope coolboyman doesn't die!"

submission: Luis vs. ClockCrew

date: August 27, 2006

or else you will take over!

good movie, the graphics were created with lines rather than the paintbrush to give a clean look to the animation, which is hard to do, but was pulled off in this movie. the music was very dramatic, there could have been sound effects to add to the explosions and such but the music being synced to the animation (or vise versa) was enough if thats what you were going for. not as much blood and gore as other movies could have had and it was sorta funny, pretty much just the overall theme of it is the humerous part.

good work, hope to see you finish more of your stuff =)

Score: 10

"good jorb guys!"

submission: Aqua Slug

date: August 23, 2006

even though i didn't play the whole way through all at once, i know it's a good game :P

Score: 4

"nothing too new or interesting..."

submission: -removed-

date: August 13, 2006

This doesn't really help me that much because I already know how to do most of these things because of the tutorials that are already out. Why do we need so many tutorials? I don't get it...

Two things made me laugh at this. 1) The one point perspective wasn't done well at all lol...Thats not what it's for and should use two point perspective for those buildings. The lines you had point in towards the middle should have gone to the opposite vanishing points on either side of the screen, and the top lines of the buildings should be going to their corresponding sides. If you're gonna teach someone something, make sure it's right before you do. 2) When you lip sync, you don't put your teeth together for a K sound. Whoever puts their teeth together while saying that isn't talking right. If any letter should have teeth together it should be T but T still has the teeth apart with the tongue barely showing behind the teeth curled up.

Sorry if i'm being harsh, but when you make tutorials that teach someone something, the thing i grade the most is how accurate what you're teaching is. Even IF there are already tutorials that explain all this in detail.

Score: 5

"overrated"

submission: The Jungle I

date: August 12, 2006

I don't know why black stick figures are so amusing...try animating something else besides a stick figure.....please no sequel either..

the background art was ok, but why do people think stick figure animation is so good? it looks unfinished and plain dumb...i mean, are you really that lazy that you can't just draw people over the stick figures?

seriously, you are lazy, admit it. even at the end you just stopped because u probably didn't feel like animating all the soldiers and helicopter...

Score: 3

"eh not that exciting..."

submission: -=Bounce=-

date: August 12, 2006

Graphics are simple but could still be better...the white background behind Times New Roman font looks horrendous btw.

Can't really say much about the style because its a background and a ball...not much else.

There is only one song you put in so there isn't that much sound.

The interactivity could be more than just clicking repeatedly at the coin too..

Overall wasn't that fun or exciting and could be better graphics wise and gameplay-wise. Like add some effects to the ball or something when it bounces or when you click. Like rotation or attached movie clips of randomly generated special effects. You should have also made it more interactive. The idea of just clicking on the coin to win isn't really that fun. You should have made it so you have one click per bounce, and if you missed the coin you have to wait till it bounces. The whole time, my ball didn't even bounce, I just repeatedly clicked to keep it in the air, so I don't even know why it's called Bounce...

Score: 9

"Good work!"

submission: Mario,Mario and Mario

date: August 10, 2006

Nice sprite editing and drawings you have here. I like the idea of it. It's very original compared to other mario movies out there. I really liked how all the different types of mario's ran into each other and such and fought. Good luck with this!